【Poem Reading Tuesday】作业:Dandelions

妖妖灵
楼主 (文学城)


It is amazing that we have finished one piece of English lyrics within 2 days!

With the help of AI,  one english song is done!

 

Please join us just for fun!

 

Lyrics:

Friends of MYSJ:

最西边的岛上(岛)

移花接木(花)

妖妖灵(妖)

7grizzly(熊)

甜虫虫(虫)

 

Composing and arrangement and vocal:

AI

 

Dandelions

 

verse 1

We are like dandelions floating to this country (岛)


Which is far away from our hometown(岛)


We gain stamina never back down(花)


As strong and sturdy as an oak tree(妖)


verse 2
 
We are like dandelions chasing our dream(妖)


Which is bitter and sweet at the same time(岛)


We make lemonade when life offers a lime(妖)


As light and graceful as the rain on the stream(岛)


chorus 
 
We are like dandelions holding small umbrellas(妖)


Which protect and shelter us from the thunderstorm(熊)


We huddle and hold together to stay warm(妖)


And light up each other's sky like estrellas(虫)

 

 

妖妖灵
感谢童鞋们!短短两天完成一首英文原创歌词!在AI的帮助下,英文歌就如此轻松完成啦:)
甜虫虫
Thank you yao yao for coming up with such a great idea!
甜虫虫
I honestly think this piece is quite nice :)
甜虫虫
I'm honored to be part of it, although I only contributed
甜虫虫
a tiny little bit to it:) It's fun!
甜虫虫
Have a great long weekend!
甜虫虫
By the way, I like the second verse the best :)
妖妖灵
I am so excited about the song! I think it is quite nice 2!
妖妖灵
Ur last phrase light up the song! Could not be better!
妖妖灵
It is hard for me 2 pick 1 as the whole lyrics are amazing!
妖妖灵
It should be published! :)
甜虫虫
I think so too :) Do you think "Dandelions" would be better

for the title?

妖妖灵
最后一句点睛之笔,升华了这首歌!虫虫你太棒啦!
妖妖灵
我觉得这种每人一句最好玩,不是负担,互相补充灵感,轻轻松松就完成一首歌词!我今天简直太兴奋啦!长周末愉快!
妖妖灵
好!现在就改!
甜虫虫
我读了前面句子,想着该怎样结尾;然后想到漫天星星照亮彼此,就有了这句。

Stars don't rhyme with umbrellas, 西班牙语中的star正好尾音和umbrellas 押韵,这就凑齐了 :)

甜虫虫
是呢。你的组织能力,号召能力强, 要大赞 :)
甜虫虫
:)
妖妖灵
我看到最后一句简直太兴奋了,打S我也写不出这么完美自然的句子!还有西班牙语加持!:)
甜虫虫
第二段你和西岛的那几句都很好啊, 我很喜欢。简单自然。:)
妖妖灵
谢谢今年小西和盈盈开发的这个赏诗节目让我对E诗感兴趣!你们几个水平太高,西岛美眉水平也真是太厉害,我跟你们吃瓜落儿:)
妖妖灵
谢谢夸奖,我也很喜欢:)
甜虫虫
嗯,要谢谢小西和盈盈。希望她俩有空回来一起玩。我没啥水平,只是喜欢去尝试各种好玩的东西 :) 妖妖晚安!

ignorance is bliss

暖冬cool夏
给你们点大大的赞,歌词写得好啊!Bitter and sweet,有梦最美!
最西边的岛上
谢谢,不过第二段里的最后一句是我和灵美眉的合作,不是我一人的哈。;-)
妖妖灵
确实,这句英文对比太漂亮啦!下次暖冬mm一定一起来玩!很好玩,省脑细胞!:)
7
7grizzly
Is "estrella" the Spanish for star?
妖妖灵
你太牛啦!这么难接的歌词都被你轻松化解!佩服S啦!:)
暖冬cool夏
写诗写歌词非所长,常常脑子一片空白:)不过下次可以试试。妖mm周末快乐!
妖妖灵
西班牙语的star!哈哈!把你那句改好点?就是音节数差不多,韵脚保留,但是中间别的改一改?:)
最西边的岛上
过奖了。我那时正在听李健的歌,应该是音乐和歌声给的灵感吧。 ;-)