【Poem Reading Tuesday】Enclosed rhyme.Write a poem on a plant

妖妖灵
楼主 (文学城)
Enclosed rhyme is the term used for "sandwich" rhyme schemes like ABA or ABBA.

 

Homework: Write a poem on a plant. You may post a picture of the plant.

 

SPRING BABY DUCKS Bursting, breaking free from egg shells with glee Baby ducks welcome their Spring-endowed worth Amidst mother Earth’s radiating mirth Ready to frolic in the pond --- there they flee.   Cheerful in their sunny color delight Ducklings quack --- inviting attention gain As they wobble gladly, devoid of strain Traversing terrain midst their dancing flight.   As water fowls of playful swimming zest They now showcase their aquatic tactic Boasting duck-technique, indeed fantastic Designed by God with His creative best.
妖妖灵
每人写一句诗,玩接龙吧。
妖妖灵
We‘re like dandelions floating to this country
妖妖灵
which is far away from our hometown
移花接木
We gain stamina never back down
妖妖灵
as strong and sturdy as an oak tree 接着接龙哈,争取凑出完整的歌词。
妖妖灵
We are like dandelions chasing our dream
最西边的岛上
which is bitter and sweet at the same time ;-)
妖妖灵
We make lemonade when life offers a lime
妖妖灵
觉没觉得我第一句英文有些熟悉?:)接得太漂亮啦!大家接着接龙啊!争取凑出16句!
最西边的岛上
看见啦。不过苦+甜+酸是什么滋味儿的菜呢,要好好想想哈 ;-)))
妖妖灵
哈哈哈,生活就是如此多姿多彩有味道:)我先去忙了~
最西边的岛上
as heavy and graceful as the rain and the wind
妖妖灵
Nice!把heavy改成light,把and改成on,把wind 改成stream如何?
最西边的岛上
好,我瞎写的,并不合意(没对上上一句),你随便改或不用,我没任何意见。完了我就删我的哈 :-)
妖妖灵
非常棒!用enclosed rhyme 都对上了!童鞋们,接着接龙啊!已经写出9句了,很棒!再写7句就大功告成了:)
妖妖灵
We’re like dandelions holding small umbrellas
最西边的岛上
dandelions with umbrellas? what a funny & nice image, hahaha
妖妖灵
每一只蒲公英的种子都是一只小雨伞啊!不然它怎么会如此浪漫:)

妖妖灵
欢迎童鞋们来接龙完成16句英文歌词!惊喜会在前面等着你:)
最西边的岛上
why another 7? why not 3? 脑子快不够用了哈,赶快去吃午饭补充能量 。。
最西边的岛上
where are 移花兄,7G兄 and others? come on! ;-)
最西边的岛上
which shelter us from storms and thunders ?
最西边的岛上
如果这句能用的话,算7G兄的哈;-),因为我已经蹭过两次他的新闻填空了。谢谢!
妖妖灵
好,point taken!能否换成the thunderstorm?这样容易押韵
最西边的岛上
改了,又加了一个 hailstorms,不然觉得有点短。可以吗? 谢谢
妖妖灵
我觉得挺好!能不用复数吗?
妖妖灵
We huddle and hold together to stay warm
甜虫虫
And light up each other's sky like estrellas

Borrowed a word from Spanish to rhyme with umbrellas. :)

妖妖灵
Amazing!!!等我有时间把整首歌词呈现出来:)
甜虫虫
Great! It's a nice poem. You inspired me :)

We worked together and wrote a poem. How nice! :)