A Lone Wild Goose. 孤雁

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godog
楼主 (文学城)

That day in the early winter was freezing cold. I drove to the lake in the evening just to have a change of scenery and have some fresh air. The lake started to freeze up. I saw a lone wild goose standing next to the reeds by the lake, shivering. I suspected that it was unwell due to cold and hunger. How did it get separated from its group? It’ll be difficult to get by on its own. After observing it for a while, I went home. I still thought about it late at night, wondering whether it could survive the long cold night.

 

【七律】孤雁

 

癸卯初冬日,天寒地冻。向晚驱车至湖边,湖水已结冰。见一孤雁立于湖边芦苇丛旁,瑟瑟发抖,疑是受冻挨饿而身不适。观察良久而归,至深夜仍甚念之,不知它能否挨过漫长寒夜。

 

病雁立身芦苇边,孤茕冻水与霜天。

曾飞云里常承爱,已了世间应有缘。

此处冰心连朔漠,当时紫霭笼山川。

平安保你生寒夜,再次相逢又一年。

 

(© December 2, 2023, godog)

 

 

 

 

盈盈一笑间
此处冰心连朔漠,当时紫霭笼山川。对仗工整,此处颈联写得好看。颔联,读起来心有戚戚。
暖冬cool夏
曾飞云里常承爱,已了世间应有缘。Go兄心柔软细腻,此诗立意好,对仗工整,诗前的短文言简意赅,赞!
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ToClouds
“平安保你生寒夜,再次相逢又一年” 诗人宅心仁厚,跃然纸上。
忒忒绿
赞!it’s a nice inspiration for a free-style poem:)
盈盈一笑间
诗人宅心仁厚,跃然纸上。+100086
盈盈一笑间
Go兄心柔软细腻,此/诗立意好,对仗工整,诗前的短文言简意赅 +100086
g
godog
希望这种共鸣是美好的
g
godog
谢谢暖冬温暖的鼓励:))
g
godog
谢谢你这么说
g
godog
Hope it can inspire you to write a nice poem
卫宁
赞GO兄双语诗!
古树羽音
本地也可看到寒冬腊月中,孤雁孤鹭在寒水中独钓寒江雪呢。
方外居士
赞双语诗!