【六洲歌头·National Day of the United States】

冠军侯
楼主 (文学城)

年年七月,国庆忆元戎。
麦迪逊、华盛顿,
杰佛逊,本杰明。
北美十三地,反殖民,宣独立;决抗战,宁牺牲,誓争雄。
列克星屯第一枪,号角吹,炮声隆。
萨拉托战役,约克镇围攻,打败英兵,露峥嵘

百年追梦,三权控,民主统,共和行。
发展猛,人才共,任驰骋,育精英。
美利坚国宪,人为本,幸福同。
科技盛,国强劲,养天兵。
维秩序,施仁政,射天狼,殄灭灾星。
叹沙达姆笨,短命本拉登,歹运俄熊。 
(刘褒体,新韵)

In July's soft cradle, our founders' echoes play,
Jefferson, Franklin, Washington, and Benjamin, in pride array.
Thirteen colonies in North America, breaking the colonial chain,
Facing adversity, valiant sacrifice, independence declared without disdain.

Lexington ablaze, trumpets' blast, cannons' mighty roar,
Saratoga's strife, Yorktown's siege, Britain's reign no more.
Centuries chasing dreams, strength vivid and real,
Democracy and republic weave tales of red, white, and blue zeal.

Marching forth with talent, on freedom's wings we soar,
Cultivating excellence, striving for more, harmonious voices implore.
The Constitution, a steadfast foundation, people at its core,
Spreading joy in the land we cherish evermore.

Scientific prowess, a showcase of national might,
Soldiers and generals, guardians in peace's serene light.
Upholding order, governance with benevolence,
Banishing shadows, dispelling scourges, a world's providence.

Justice and unity, Saddam's folly laid bare,
Bin Laden's darkness, a brief yet brutal affair.
Russia, a bear facing impending gloom,
Beneath stars and stripes, dispelling shadows, lifting the world from doom.

 

暖冬cool夏
厉害厉害!Democracy and republic weave tales of red, white。。。好!
冠军侯
多谢赏读!
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godog
哇这么长的词,仍然给人一气呵成的感觉
冠军侯
谢欣赏!六州歌头一般都是历史题材厚重雄浑
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TJKCB
"Jefferson, Franklin, Washington,Benjamin?"BenjaminFranklin?

"Jefferson, Franklin, Washington,Benjamin?"

for Benjamin Franklin?

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TJKCB
National Day of the United Stat=United States?

[National Day of the United Stat]=United States?

冠军侯
多谢指点,为了押韵选择困难!
冠军侯
不知怎么回事paste时给截掉!多谢提醒!已添加
盈盈一笑间
占位点赞,有空细看。
盈盈一笑间
今天忙了一天,现在终于可以坐下来静心读诗词。哇!用中国古诗词,评论美国历史,很惊艳 ~ ~
盈盈一笑间
列克星屯第一枪,号角吹,炮声隆。 萨拉托战役,约克镇围攻,打败英兵,露峥嵘
盈盈一笑间
今夏去波士顿一游,刚去过列克星屯(莱克星顿)。读到此处,分外亲切。
盈盈一笑间
中文好,英文诗写得更棒。这么长的诗,一气呵成,并且押韵工整。佩服!
冠军侯
谢谢!我觉得比写中国的事简单!
冠军侯
美国好几个地方有这个莱克星屯!肯塔基,南卡等地都有!
冠军侯
庄主责任心强!每个贴都评的仔细到位!感谢!
盈盈一笑间
应该的。美坛好多精品贴。值得我细细学习。:))
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Oona
先赞,后仔细一遍遍拜读:-)
冠军侯
谢谢