Ice jingle

冯墟
楼主 (文学城)

Hello my friend, if

you come to me in winter time

I will bring you near the outlet of an ancient pond

where the sun never shines

We will see the wind-driven ripples superimposed on

             the current from the inlet to the outlet

             break the thin ice apart into pieces

             and make them jingle

That is the music I want to share

 

On a calmer day, however,

the ice was solid

you barely saw the ripples

much less the water flow

The pond looked still

             as calm, as senile, as an old monk’s face

Who knew the old monk was composing and

             rehearsing in the quiet place

             in stillness there was a song

 

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妖妖灵
Where does the sound come from? Creek? Nice poem!
妖妖灵
Sounds like lyrics. It reminds me of sound of silence.
冯墟
The jingling sound came from the pieces of ice that the

ripples pushed to collide.

冯墟
Thanks for the comparison.
冯墟
I stole the last line from Charlotte Sorenson: In stillness

there is a song.

妖妖灵
冰水相融的声音,大自然的声音好奇妙,你也好有心,把它录下来~
妖妖灵
去听了,感觉歌曲高大上。你写诗的格式有意思,曲曲折折像画廊~
冯墟
我是第一次听到薄冰块相撞击的声音,脆脆的,很奇妙。
冯墟
我并不知道有首歌。文学城改变了我的格式,无可奈何。
冯墟
谢谢告知!
妖妖灵
恰恰相反,我觉得你的诗的格式很独特好看别具一格:)
冯墟
谢谢!
j
jianchi9090
心静才能听到自然的声音。我想起:大絃嘈嘈如急雨小絃切切如私语嘈嘈切切错杂弹大珠小珠落玉盘】
冯墟
对的。我的录音里面有其它的声音,冰块相撞的声音很清脆,犹如风铃。
梅雨潭
恭喜冯墟。首页进来,谢谢网管,Ice jingle 推荐成功
冯墟
谢谢雨潭班长!