In 2022, at that special night of July thirty-one, I danced with you again for the first time After such a long time. You held one hand of mine, I put the other one on your shoulder, When the music began We swayed in the room in delight. I caught you lookin at me when I looked at you, My heart beated like a drum As the first time we fell in love.
Back to the time when we were young , We used to dance on the nights of the weekends. I stepped on your feet so many times, You just returnd with smiles. I gotta a feeling that you have a heart as big as the ocean. In the music of quick Waltz, You twirled me all around the floor, I never worried about fall Cause I knew I was in good hands.
Shall we dance again? Yes, for sure, Till the end of our lives.
This is so nice! it makes me feel warm and hopeful :)
To me, it's not so much about how well one writes, but how much one feels. Having that said, I think this piece is well written with a nice flow. I really enjoyed reading it. Great picture too, beautiful!
In 2022, at that special night of July thirty-one,
I danced with you again for the first time
After such a long time.
You held one hand of mine, I put the other one on your shoulder,
When the music began
We swayed in the room in delight.
I caught you lookin at me when I looked at you,
My heart beated like a drum
As the first time we fell in love.
Back to the time when we were young ,
We used to dance on the nights of the weekends.
I stepped on your feet so many times,
You just returnd with smiles.
I gotta a feeling that you have a heart as big as the ocean.
In the music of quick Waltz,
You twirled me all around the floor,
I never worried about fall
Cause I knew I was in good hands.
Shall we dance again?
Yes, for sure,
Till the end of our lives.
请版主不推荐上城头。为了参加活动，我胡拼烂凑，就在内部献丑好了。
To me, it's not so much about how well one writes, but how much one feels. Having that said, I think this piece is well written with a nice flow. I really enjoyed reading it. Great picture too, beautiful!