A Bird Feather

C
CBA7
楼主 (文学城)

A bird feather in the green field
Who left there?
Fought for love?
Won?

Birds in the sky
Who made their feathers?
Love
Love wins

k
kirn
Who owned their feathers?/ Love/ love's wings
C
CBA7
Love made birds, their wings, and their feathers :)
妖妖灵
小7的英文诗总是有画面感,很赞!

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妖妖灵
angel‘s wings:)
C
CBA7
谢谢灵灵的鼓励和温馨提示。
枫林晓
结构不错!精炼深刻。
移花接木
Who made their feathers? God knows
C
CBA7
谢枫林,枫林晓我心 :)
C
CBA7
Yes, God knows everything including 移花接木 :)
忒忒绿
A
AP33912
再加个w, 就. com 了。feather for words bird for foods.
C
CBA7
谢小绿。
盈盈一笑间
短小精致,别有深意。欣赏小7好诗