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甜虫虫
楼主 (文学城)

In a Deep Dark Hole

 

You said,

You were hurt,

You felt down and low.

You fell into a deep dark hole.

And you wanted to

Lie down flat low

At the bottom

For a while.

 

Why not, said I.

I'm coming down

To lie down next to you.

We watch birds flying high

In the sunlight.

We watch comets

Shooting across the sky

At night.

 

At the bottom

Of that deep dark hole,

You and I lie down flat

And stay low.

 

At one point this evening, I really wanted to lie down flat and weep. Ok, not literally. :)

I went running with my puppies on a small hill this evening.

There are several trails intersecting one another. I usually zigzag the trails and make a loop that is about 4 and half miles. After finishing running, I find a spot and do some stretching, then go back to the car and head home.

This time, when I went back to my car, I found that I lost my car key! I checked all my pockets. It was nowhere. I realized the car key must have bounced out from the unzipped pocket of my jacket that was tied on my waist, and I didn't hear it because I was listening to music while running.

Puppies and I were all tired and thirsty. I called my husband and asked him to pick up the puppies. Then I headed back to the trails to look for my car key. I was tired, and it was getting dark. At that point, I jsut wanted to lie down flat and weep. But I knew that's not going to work for me. The key would not show up on its own. So I dragged my legs and slowly jogging along the same trails I ran on a little while ago.

It was getting darker, and I didn't see any one for a while. Finally, I saw a lady and her dog walking towards me. I asked her if she saw a black key. She said sorry that she didn't pay attention and did not see it. And she was worried for me and wished me luck before she left. I kept on going. And saw her again at an intersection. I still had not found my key. She wished me good luck again. It was getting darker, but I knew somehow, I would find it eventually. So I kept on going, surveying every inch of the ground I was passing.

About half way, I saw the black key lying right in the middle of the trail. I finally found it! I picked it up and headed back to the parking lot.

On the way back, I felt I am such a lucky person. I have always found the stuff I lost so far (knock on the wood). I saw the lady and her dog another time just before I turned on the trail that leads back to the parking lot. She was very happy for me. We said good night to each other and parted.

Good night and always keep your faith: Lie down flat, everything will be alright! haha :)

 

Link to the original post: 【 Lay Down Flat 】

【 Lay Down Flat 】

Blue sky 
Clouds fly
Sun is up there to shine 
Don't ask me why 
This is the summer I don't like 
I don't want to fly high
I just want to lay down flat 
Enjoy my backyard moonlight 
Along with my love at my side
Relax, don't be so tight
Let all of the worries slide
Life is a delicious pie
I like every bite
Be yourself to enjoy day and night 
I believe the power of "Lay Down Flat”
Everything will be alright 

 

 

 


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beautifulwind
失而复得的感觉真是特别棒!虫虫好lucky!绑架得好棒!:)
以美丽回答一切
:)
天边一片白云
nice 绑架 and Story. 虫虫好棒!you have faith and perseverance.
陶陶三
虫虫以美丽回答以美丽回答一切。相信能找回失去的感觉挺好。:-)
天山晨
失而复得的感觉真是特别棒!虫虫好lucky!绑架得好棒!:) -beautifulwind+1 为你加油!读贴时我正在学首歌【如

果爱还在】,把我也感动了

移花接木
bet u already lied flat and kissed the key 1000times in ur heart

the moment you found it  

你回去找钥匙时,车门锁着,小狗们老老实实等在原地?不怕丢了吗?

 

天玉之
很美丽,温柔的诗,的确,有时一个人痛苦难过的时候,只需要有个懂的人相伴,不需说什么 ~~ 周末愉快!
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AP33912
reading and learning , 躺平,Lie down flat low。
盈盈一笑间
虫虫以美丽回答以美丽回答一切。相信能找回失去的感觉挺好。:-) -陶陶三- +10086!!!
忒忒绿
A very lovely piece.
忒忒绿
also the vivid story
甜虫虫
是呢,我一直觉得自己这大半生好幸运:)谢谢美风!周末愉快:)
甜虫虫
谢谢好诗,激发我写打油诗的灵感,哈哈 周末愉快:)
甜虫虫
Thank you 白云!perseverance, I'm not so sure :)

But I do have a strong faith in my surroundings. :)

Have a great weekend!

 

甜虫虫
陶陶周末好!是的,这种信念给我很强的安全感:)
甜虫虫
谢谢天山!周末好!不知道这首歌呢,期待你的演绎:)
甜虫虫
haha, I wish I could say "Yes, I kissed the key a million times"

But the reality is: when I saw the key, I said to the key: I found you! I knew you must be lying down flat somwhere waiting for me to find you.

Then my mind went like, now which way is the quickest to go back to the car? haha

Have a great Sunday!

甜虫虫
谢谢玉诗人读贴点评!诗人有一颗善感的心! 周末愉快:)
甜虫虫
I'm not sure I translated it correct or not. :) Thank you!

Your piece is very nice!

甜虫虫
谢谢盈盈!周末愉快:)
甜虫虫
Thank you! :)
天山晨
好的,还没完全学会,唱了就发给你
轻轻的我来
躺平都躺得有诗意.
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LYJiang
In a sense, a black hole has all the light...

虫虫 must know what a worm hole looks like. Lost and found, your car key was a key to an enlightening universe. This was an epiphany. Not only did you look at/on the bright side, you also discovered dark matter that energized you. Lying down in your deep dark hole, you were floating above the mundane world. I bet you might hear stars scraping across the night sky overhead. You were so much and so far into the world that you had wormed yourself out of the world. You define the world because you can defy the world.

A great post, 虫虫!

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LYJiang
Two thumbs up!
甜虫虫
Wow, yang yang! That's the best comment ever I got so far!

You read me so well! Unbelievable! 

You said so well here:

"Not only did you look at/on the bright side, you also discovered dark matter that energized you"

"You define the world because you can defy the world"

Thank you so much!

Good night!