【蓝队】【美坛蓝绿绑架争覇】卡萨布兰卡

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LinMu
楼主 (文学城)

你不停说着卡萨布兰卡

澳洲有一种叫卡萨布兰卡的花,象征沉默的守望

作为城市,卡萨布兰卡不是我的家乡

我也不曾去过白色之城漂泊 

 

You kept talking about Casablanca  

There was a flower called Casablanca in Australia,

A symbol of silent waiting. As a city, Casablanca was not my hometown  

Nor had I ever been to the White City   

 

你说梦到遍布清真寺的城市边缘

有一座圣玛丽教堂,长得与悉尼的教堂一样

我们在里面举行婚礼。你没穿婚纱

一手拿着白色的卡萨布兰卡花,口里不停说着卡萨布兰卡 

 

You said you dreamed of the edge of the city dotted with mosques  

There was a St. Mary's church that looked just like the one in Sydney  

We were getting married in it, yet you were not wearing a wedding dress 

Holding a white Casablanca flower in one hand, kept muttering Casablanca

 

我们没有一起去看卡萨布兰卡

那时我独自身在悉尼。我只记得褒曼和鲍嘉

以及她们的爱国和爱情。当然还有一把手枪

我对褒曼一见倾心。请原谅,后来我一直暗恋她

 

We did not go to see Casablanca together. I was alone in Sydney at the time.

I only remembered Bergman and Bogart, their patriotism, and their love story.

Of course, a pistol with them. I fell in love with Bergman at first sight.

Please forgive me, I have had a crush on her ever since 

 

当时我们都喜欢写诗

无聊时看武侠小说,修练金庸的武功

在诗里过招。我曾告诉你

我只用了两年就修成金钟罩铁布衫功夫  

 

 At that time, we were both crazy about poems. When we were bored

We read martial arts novels and practiced Jin Yong's Kung Fu

Pretending to fight in the poem. I once told you,

It only took me two years to master the Golden Bell iron cocoon Kung Fu

 

后来,我说的后来就是婚礼前一天

你手握卡萨布兰卡里的手枪

于摇曳的烛光中在我面前出现

我还未练到枪弹不入,成了你的俘虏 

 

 Later, what I meant was the day before the wedding

Holding the pistol from the movie Casablanca

You appeared in front of me by the flickering candlelight

My Kung Fu was not good enough to be bulletproof yet, and became your prisoner

 

为什么是卡萨布兰卡?当我问到第十遍 

不知是否和十字架有关,教堂里下起了雪

从衣兜拿出一枚戒指,我向你走去 

眼睛看到的是黑洞洞的枪口

 

When I asked the tenth time, why was Casablanca?

I wondered whether it was related to the Cross, snow started falling in the church.

Taking a ring out of my pocket, I walked towards you

What I saw was the black muzzle of a pistol 

 

陶陶三
很棒啊,有点毕赣电影《地球最后的夜晚》中故事的味道。那电影没有《路边野餐》成功,但故事有味道。:-)
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xiaoruo
很好,令人回味!
移花接木
super!
盈盈一笑间
原来是绑架了一个新娘在教堂举行婚礼啊。这明明属于蓝队啊,很符合绑架主题,参加活动毫无问题啊。:)
盈盈一笑间
诗写得非常棒!有旖旎的想象力,有蒙太奇的电影感 ,充满了强大的诗歌意象的发展力。诗人用诗歌的形式向读者讲述了一个浪漫而传奇的故事
移花接木
自己的性别自己说了算
盈盈一笑间
陶导果然是专业人士,点评到位啊。:)
盈盈一笑间
那按照这个标准,林木肯定是蓝队啊。LOL
陶陶三
我刚刚唱了个儿歌,感兴趣么?可以去听听清唱《小鱼儿》。:-)
盈盈一笑间
好啊,丢个链接过来。我来听听。:)
陶陶三
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LinMu
谢谢。羡慕,看过很多电影啊
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LinMu
谢谢鼓励,问好!
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LinMu
谢谢鼓励,问好!
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LinMu
谢谢盈盈鼓励,受之有愧。
陶陶三
嗯,看了一些。因为电影是个综合艺术,涉及文学、历史、文化、音乐、舞蹈、摄影、电脑等方方面面,可以像八爪鱼一样。:-)
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LinMu
小众电影,国外获奖,国内没票房
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LinMu
听了,清唱,厉害
陶陶三
这不重要啊。只要你能看到就行。就是一些美食。我只教孩子三样:Outdoor、看电影和驾驶。
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beautifulwind
这不明明绑架的玉教吗,不用担心绿队得亚军,绑一绑多尽兴,不用当白队,想归蓝,想归绿,随你!:)
天玉之
+10086 很耐读,赞
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LinMu
谢谢鼓励,问好。
L
LinMu
有版主这句话,就算这篇通过了,我归队
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beautifulwind
哈哈,诗人果然这么体贴呢!:)
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LYJiang
Bogart: I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.
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LinMu
谢谢读评,问好!
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beautifulwind
恭喜LinMu。首页进来,谢谢网管,绑架活动 卡萨布兰卡 推荐成功
天边一片白云
先赞,再慢慢欣赏学习。
忒忒绿
木应该留在美坛;)
陶陶三
木木很有诗意。
天山晨
这又是一个远方,没去过,诗写得好!绑得好!