【蓝队】【美坛蓝绿绑架争霸】改写The disappeared BAOZIs, 我绑了谁?

移花接木
楼主 (文学城)

My mom likes eating Chinese ban (BAOZIs), mom's family all good at making delicious Baozi, grandma, auntie, uncle,everyone. 

I had seen her failed a few times to make her own, poorly mixed and kneaded flour, bumpy dough.   She was so frastrated and gave up. She ordered Baozi from outside several times,  I wondered how they tasted, she never let me try.  

Later, she got a magical box, added flour and water, and came out a smooth dough.

So she made Baozi one day,  she spent the whole morning. She left them rest on the counter. Now mom was napping in sofa.  Later mom would eat them with dad and sister,never gave one to me. They looked so well and I was drooling badly.   Woo,woo,woo, not fair, I am a good kid, but I want Baozi... ... Baozi. 

Action...

one Baozi, yummy... ... I couldn't stop, another baozi, another baozi... ...

All of a sudden "啊啊.................................", sounded my mom's screaming " My buns!" 

then dad "What happened?" "What happened?" "What happened?" "What happened?"

I still had one Baozi stuffed in my mouth and turned to mom with a guilty gazing. 

She started snatching it from my mouth. I looked at the countertop, there was one bun left. 

"Where are those six buns?" mom asked dad,

"I didn't touch any of buns", he answered, of course he didn't, I ate six raw buns!

The rest of the day, mom seemed so worry about me.  Why? I just ate Baozi, maybe only because she is mom, every mom in the world is the same.  I was OK. I ate OK, I played OK, I pooped OK... ...

That's my story of the missing Baozi.

Hi, uncles and aunties, I am a black labradoodle, and this is me and my snow sculpture. My name is 汪汪汪

grabbing Baozi from the tall counter, I am a big boy now...

Sister's drawing of me stealing Baozi

The disappeared BAOZIs A Special Christmas in 2020
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beautifulwind
沙发!
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beautifulwind
哈哈哈,可爱的花狗狗吃baozi!:)好一个才思敏捷的花狗狗!读出来!:)
欲借嵯峨
想念家人和家乡美食,我有次回国第二天在街边小摊连吃6根儿地沟油油条两碗豆腐脑, 被姐姐叫停,连炸油条的两口子纳闷儿这主儿是干啥的
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ibelieu
Very successful use of personification here. Well done!
天边一片白云
移花不愧是做包子专家。绑架了包子。喜欢你的改写,更形象。
移花接木
绑了你两个帖,完全按你的线索,都以你的原句为基础,换了个说话角度
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beautifulwind
花董真是有心:)
盈盈一笑间
白云这篇包子贴让人印象深刻。我也记得耶 ~ ~
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beautifulwind
对了,小tips,把帖子弄短点,省劲儿:)
移花接木
白云的帖内容总能给我留下很深印象,知道有什么可以去找,
唐古
绑架肉包子,点赞!
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Ha65494
写得非常生动可爱!
移花接木
厉害,6根油条 vs 6个包子; 嵯峨 vs labradoodle;
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beautifulwind
嗯,帖子的用心程度和给人留下的印象成正比:)
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Ha65494
蓝:绿 = 200: 190
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beautifulwind
哈美主持人棒棒哒!辛苦啦!:)
天边一片白云
good tip·下次来个短的。
天边一片白云
换个角度makes difference.
移花接木
我什么时候错过了? 哈梅是这次活动女司仪, @};--
移花接木
所谓的学英语要讲究,说,学,逗,唱
移花接木
through a dog's eyes
移花接木
irresistible taste and smell
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Ha65494
^_^
忒忒绿
改得棒棒哒!蓝队加油
甜虫虫
What a cute story from 汪汪汪's perspective! Well done! !
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beautifulwind
恭喜花董。首页进来,谢谢网管,绑架活动 改写The disappeared BAOZIs, 我绑了谁 推荐成功
天山晨
花董包子情结很严重!写得好