【ChildhoodFantasy】《童年的家园》

忒忒绿
楼主 (文学城)


 

【ChildhoodFantasy】《童年的家园》

《槐树》


槐树开花了
爸爸在上边
我在下边
槐花落满地
我捧在手心里
闻它们的 香味

槐树开花了
我在上边
爸爸在下边
槐花落满地
爸爸把花枝编成 花环
给我戴头上

槐树开花了
我爬上高高的 枝头
闻它们的 香味
低头看
爸爸 不再在下边了
泪与槐花 一起
落满 地


The Pagoda Tree
By Tweeting Green

The pagoda tree was blooming
Dad climbed up its top
I stood aside
The white flowers fell down all onto the ground
I scooped them up with my hands
And smell their scent

The pagoda tree was blooming
I climbed up its top
Dad stood aside
The white flowers fell down all onto the ground
Dad weaved the flower branches into a garland
And put upon my head

The pagoda tree is blooming
I climb up the high branches
To smell their scent
I look down, but don't see dad
He doesn’t stand there anymore
My tears and the white flowers
Are falling down all onto the ground


《家园》


呆呆地
望着
烟囱里 升起的 炊烟
袅袅

妈妈
厨灶前
忙活着 生火 做饭
弥漫的 蒸气
散散


吸吸鼻子
想辨别
炊烟与馒头的 味道
哪个香甜


Home
By Tweeting Green

I am dazedly looking at the smoke
Rising out of the chimney
And lingering high over and over

Mom in the kitchen keeps busy
Making a fire and cooking
The steaming vapor diffuses out
White and soft as clouds

I sniff to distinguish the tastes
Of the cooking smoke and the steamed buns
And figure which one is sweet




 

忒忒绿
友们,新周愉快!;)
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ibelieu
Sweet sweet piece; feeling sad reading it. This

is abou the only time when I wish I had a religion to fall back on.

忒忒绿
爱比早安!Sorry for making you sad, but we have grown up and everythi
忒忒绿
Everything is alright, right? Let’s cheer up for our wonderful

Life 

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beautifulwind
把眼泪比作槐树花,好形象的联想。因为你爸妈从小细致入微的呵护,所以你一直自信善良:)我小时候吃过槐树花,你吃过吗?
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beautifulwind
辨别炊烟与馒头哪个香甜,所以,你今天吸烟?:)
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ibelieu
Oh, yes, everything is alright. Just moved by your piece.
移花接木
槐花很香甜,撸下一大把,塞满嘴,大人们告诉我们槐花有毒, 我猜是骗小孩们别去爬树,我很怀疑那时候人们有爱护树木的觉悟.
忒忒绿
槐树是中国尤其是北方比较普遍的树种,家庭的院子里,大街小巷的街旁路边都可见到,夏至,一串串白色的花开放,好看而芬芳,会爬树的就爬
忒忒绿
就爬上去摘,不会爬树的就用个竹竿把花朵夹下来,直接捂进嘴里,淡淡的香甜,夏天的味道;)
忒忒绿
哈哈, 谢小主,我不抽香烟,只偶尔舔舔雪茄;)
忒忒绿
花帅爱花、移花、爱到吃花;看来都有吃过槐花;)
忒忒绿
槐树、槐花成了家乡的标志,家乡的味道了;)
欲借嵯峨
我小时候跟着大孩子一起吃槐花,第二天全体腮帮子都肿得像馒头,带头那小子挨了他爸一顿狠揍
忒忒绿
哈哈,欲哥看来没少吃,脸肿了,免了一顿打,值;)
陶陶三
美好的父亲节献礼,亦诗亦歌。:-)
唐古
举头望槐树 低头思父亲
忒忒绿
谢淘导;)
忒忒绿
糖糖的静夜思;)
天边一片白云
哎呀,跟绿诗人撞了。我也计划写槐花。你写这么好,我该绕道了。
忒忒绿
槐树需大书特书,从不撞车,白云快快写来便是;)
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beautifulwind
喜欢这种心有灵犀,等着:)
青松站
T.G.-,how r u-:))..

Your tear-jerk poem-:))&

Was thinking about home &loved ones too-:))..

In a similiar vein perhaps-this ladies choir i believe-,

Sang their hearts out about longing & attachment of the soul-:&

A belated father's day wish too-

To u..-:))_

Your poem is such a tear-jerk-:))..-,

Thank you..-:))..

Tear-jerk-like your piece-,

Always-:))..

..

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beautifulwind
松松,别忘了参加ChildhoodFantasy活动哈,本周五结束:)颁奖典礼酷帅极啦:)

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忒忒绿
看来大家都在埋头写作业
忒忒绿
谢松松,祝好;)
甜虫虫
绿诗人的这两首诗好美呢!也是阳春白雪~~~
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xiaosai
清新中夹杂着伤感。绿诗人是个非常感性的人 ~~~
忒忒绿
虫虫好,感谢!
忒忒绿
谢小赛看帖!
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beautifulwind
恭喜忒绿。首页进来,谢谢网管,CF活动《童年的家园》推荐成功