【天玉之近体诗绝句八首】 五歌韵

天玉之
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  These are some Chinese metrical poems that I recently wrote. It was a fun rhyme poetry game played with four other poetry friends. Our Ying Ying was one of them.  

 

     We have  48 hours to compose, using Pingshui rhyme system, "Wu Ge" rhymes, about one hundred or so words to choose from. The word assigned to me is Ge, which means each of my poems must contain the word 歌. Some describe writing metrical poems is like dancing with chains on your ankles. The game that we played is like dancing with heavy chains on both our ankles and arms : ) These are the eight quatrains that I wrote. I finally had a taste of the ancient poets' so called body slimming 苦吟 experience. Although the slimming part may not be as effective as running, I did get my fair share of both bitterness and sweetness during the writing process ~ ~

 

    I suggest playing the Chinese classical music attached below and drinking some green tea while reading the poems, to get the full experience of it : )

 

分韵诗歌游戏,在48小时内写出,用平水韵“五歌”韵,每首需含 “歌”字,这是我写的八首绝句,尝了一下古人“苦吟”的滋味 ~~

 

 

 


 

  【天玉之近体诗绝句八首】

 

 


       【五绝】画眉            


泉水润双娥,青枝婉啭歌。

语多笼里哑,空谷惠风和。

 

 

 

 

 


          【七绝】玉青河


月下无声一棹歌,水波微漾玉青河。                      

菰蒲深处心音振,柔了时光意渐酡。

 

 

 

 

 


           【七绝】潇湘怨


曾是檀栾青郁翠,萧萧凤尾蹭欢歌。

子规夜夜啼无寐,似唤还吾宝玉哥。

 

 

 

 

 

 


             【七绝】情渡


纯真不齿唱浮歌,相悦知音雪雨磨。

阅尽古今千百事,最难负载渡情波。

 

 

 

 

 

      【五绝】鸳鸯


无谱水边歌,缘深入碧河。

一番风雨后,浊去拨清波。

 

 

 

 


            【七绝】婆娑             


在君眼底舞婆娑,因解晴眸从未挪。

七色花香旋汝醉,灵犀一点蝶扇歌。

 



 

 

 


        【七绝】嵩山仙境

 

江湖沉起菀枯歌,良莠闲人走马过。

花蝶酒香仙一境,师师轻倚燕青哥。

 

 

 

 

 

       【五绝】远眺                                


月洒陈年酒,涛吟反复歌。

启窗天海阔,落日与君多。

 

 

             

 

 

 

 

                        2021.5.13~5.15

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 


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二郎桥
花蝶酒香仙一境,师师轻倚燕青哥。喜欢:)
天玉之
谢谢喜欢!周日好 ~
移花接木
辛苦了涵盖地理时空现实传说,好像水浒没交代师师与燕青哥有啥实质性进展,是与徽宗赵佶哥吧
天玉之
呵呵,网上有不同说法 :)

 

俩人可能隐归了

 

:)

天山晨
诗画同赏!很有味道!好个“师师轻倚燕青哥”!看来你看过这部剧了,我也好喜欢这几集!
忒忒绿
五绝七绝,赞
b
beautifulwind
喜欢“ 灵犀一点蝶扇歌”。玉教真行!大脑语言区一定极为发达!:)
天玉之
谢谢!发达不一定,喜欢文字倒是真的 :)
天玉之
谢谢,握手!挺浪漫的故事 ~~
天玉之
谢谢!
天边一片白云
高产诗人。我读得跟不上你写得。
天玉之
呵呵,我这也是前段写的,把它做成合集而已,谢谢赏读!周末愉快!
盈盈一笑间
再读再赞,美诗美画!
天玉之
谢谢盈盈!记得你的字是 “风”,很喜欢你的那首《牡丹》~~
甜虫虫
诗和配图都好美!佩服佩服:) 分享的乐曲也很美
青松站
對美的洞察-:))。。

夏安-:))。。


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There's a place for us,
Somewhere a place for us.
Peace and quiet and open air wait for us.
Somewhere.
There's a time for us,
Someday there'll be a time for us:
Time together with time to spare,
Time to learn, time to care.
Someday, somewhere,
We'll find a new way of living,
Will find a way of forgiving.
Somewhere.
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Somewhere — West Side Story
1961 film lyrics · TONY There's a place for us, Somewhere a place for us, Peace and quiet and open air · MARIA There's a time for us,
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天玉之
谢谢虫虫,高兴你喜欢!我自己也喜欢那些音乐,听听挺开心,放松 ~~
天玉之
There's a place for us, a time and a place for us...Wow,

 

what a beautiful song and lyric! 谢谢青松赠诗,太喜欢了!收藏了

 

也祝你夏安!~~

青松站
Broadway..L.B.的-&歌詞加上了。。謝謝詩人-:))。。