【梅雨潭的爱】A Baby Fawn (poem and painting ), 祝花董,玉教,所有双子生快

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beautifulwind
楼主 (文学城)

I decided to write English poems last night, and then I  composed one this morning.

LOL.

Donot laugh at me, as I even donot know what I wrote. :)

And the attached is my painting (涂鸦) on a fawn. 

I need to learn skills on painting even though I really have no time. 

But hey, doesnot matter, just want to say:

"Happy birthday to 花董,玉教 及所有 双子 in MYSJ."

也谢谢所有来美坛玩儿的朋友们,

有你们在这里一起玩,一起学,一起美

好开心

 

"Baby Fawn" 

by beautifulwind

She is a lonely baby fawn,

with a hurting heart,

hiding in the forest at dawn.

The blossoms on the tree

bring sunshine

with delight flowing on

All of her fears are suddenly gone

She gains her strength,

standing, running, and singing a unchained song

"Happy birthday to Gemini",

it echoes in the valley on and on

 

From Internet :"Gemini season begins on May 21, a day that ushers in the heat and electricity of summer. Gemini is accordingly excellent at guiding change and transformation. These curious twins are terrific pioneers, using their energy to spearhead innovative creative projects. A fearless thinker, Gemini is always down to try something new. But after they have shared their progressive vision with the world, it’s best to let these twins get back to ideating: These hyperactive air signs have short attention spans and are most satisfied when they can move fluidly from one idea to the next." 

 

Baby fawn by beautifulwind

天玉之
"Happy birthday to Gemini", it echoes in the valley on and on。。

 

Wow, what a lovely poem and painting! Thank you so much, I am touched!

 

What about you, Hua Dong? 流泪了吗?

 

咱们得回谢啊,想想。。。

甜虫虫
Both the poem and the painting are very nice! Great try!

The fawn is so cute! It has very long eyelashes. :)

甜虫虫
Happy Birthday to Geminis!
天玉之
诗很可爱,诗就是从心底流出的清泉,你这首就是,小鹿也是,稚气纯真,美风版主有才啊,还会画画,我最喜欢你的朗诵声音了,柔美圆润
天玉之
多谢虫虫祝福!~
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beautifulwind
嘿嘿,专门买的细细的刷子来画它:)生平第一次写英文诗,自己都被自己逗笑啦。:)
甜虫虫
诗很棒呢,还押韵!“it echoes in the valley on and on” 很喜欢这一句
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beautifulwind
不会画画,这是涂鸦,凭兴趣,不是凭技巧,因为没时间没精力学技巧:)谢谢玉教喜欢我的狼诵:)
甜虫虫
我家有个小双子:)
天玉之
画得很好呢,它的眼睛像是在说话,不知道美版还会“狼诵”,哪天应该跟花董合一下,记得他有刀狼的嗓子
天边一片白云
美凤即有天分又勤奋,麻利。你又挖掘了一个你的潜能了。
天山晨
诗和画都很棒,美风也是天才妹子一枚,太赞!
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beautifulwind
祝你家小双子生日快乐!这个baby fawn的诗和画也正好送给她:)
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ibelieu
A song from the heart. A spirit set free. A

star is born!  

天山晨
+1
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beautifulwind
亲果酱了,我们在这里一起玩翻译听歌这么久,一切都是水到渠成,感恩在美坛遇到这么优秀的你们,让我近朱者赤:)
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beautifulwind
谢谢你果酱。天山的诗歌水平很高,在美坛尽情展示吧:)
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beautifulwind
还多请大师指点,我很喜欢砖头的,这是我当初注册来网上的原因:)
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beautifulwind
千万不要回谢,这是我对你们来美坛玩儿的感谢:)
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just_4_fun
Geez, I know you have a photographic memory, but you also have a

natural inclination for drawing 

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just_4_fun
Happy Birthday to all above
甜虫虫
替她谢谢美风:)她会很喜欢你的小鹿。前几天刚在路上看到过两只刚出生不久的小鹿,好可爱
甜虫虫
谢谢天山!
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just_4_fun
美语世界应该可以叫做“美语诗界”了,如果要提高,还可以规定所有进来的人只能英语评论或作文,至少中英双语,才不辜负美坛水准

祝贺。你画的太棒了。
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LYJiang
A treat, definitely a treat! 花董、玉教,各位双子生日快乐!
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Giantfan
My hat off to you. You have a great imaginative mind & a good s

start.  & welcome to the fascinating world of poetry.  

盈盈一笑间
哈哈,站这里,同意扇子哥
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beautifulwind
Thx 4 ur couragement!It is interesting to draw something from

scratch.

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beautifulwind
美坛的删帖原则就是指南。美坛也是放松休闲的地方,随意,对美语不要求,但主帖需要有英文才会置顶的。
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beautifulwind
谢谢立的鼓励。为了给这幅画配上英文,正好就临时把昨晚的愿望变成现实:)谢谢你。你问怎么查出来的歌曲,

那先考考你,如果是你,你怎么解决?:)

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beautifulwind
嗯,必须的。 同祝福双子寿星们:)
移花接木
还是没躲过去,都怪玉教授,我觉得玉教授确实有点hyperactive

干嘛要跟玉教授搭茬双子座,,,,,

诗写的挺好,文笔流畅自如,情节展开的自然,

小鹿画的好,别的不说,看那眼神,怯生生神韵出来了,

这模特我好像见过。

有两点想法:写诗的动机? 不知其他诗人如何想,我自己也诌过几个,但都是突然被什么启发来了,被灵感驱使,不是为了写而写,

我理解fawn本身就是baby deer的意思,还用说 baby fawn??

 

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beautifulwind
谢谢。我有严重的拖延症,半年前就想写英文歌,到现在也没有实现,谢谢这么多诗人来美坛,

I realize writing an English poem is very helpful. 

Hopefully, I can write a English song in 6 months. :)

R u a Gemini?Happy birthday to you !:)

盈盈一笑间
躲啥?放心,我一定会继续

歧视你们星座哒 

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beautifulwind
哈哈,不要怪别人:)

我对星座那么有研究,礼物是必须要准备的。

嗯,模特你应该见过:)

只有一幅画怎么能符合美坛主帖原则,

写诗今天早晨一蹴而就, 会把自己的感觉带进去

当然知道fawn的意思,故意要的baby fawn,就如同“小小”一样,加强怜爱的意思吧。

 

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beautifulwind
哈哈,写诗,对于我这个文盲来说忒难了。:)
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Giantfan
I am unfortunately not a Gemini but I don't mind to celebrate my

Bday every month :)

盈盈一笑间
瞎说!明明是大才女,是被美坛耽误的诗坛才女啊!诗歌和绘画,都非常好!妖妖,优秀!
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Giantfan
encouragement... before he/she notices that :)
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beautifulwind
Thank u,Poet Fan!:)Then,what is ur zodiac sign?How come u r so

good at writing English poems?:)

天玉之
分析得好,聪明。没我啥事哈,我刚来坛,努力做个好坛友。Hypoactive? 那叫bubbly, cheerful. 藤校专招这

样的呢 :)

 

那画,不是一天画出来的吧,

俺刚来坛几天。Go figure. 

 

Baby Fawn. 好妙!

 

俺去静思,做瑜伽了。

盈盈一笑间
哈哈,赞bubbly, cheerful. 在梅雨潭,一起玩,一起疯,一起学,一起美。偶也~~~
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beautifulwind
哈哈哈,应该是cheerful的玉教让我决定的:)

那画难道不是两天画出来的?:)

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beautifulwind
LOL。谢谢!:)
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Giantfan
Scorpio. I am hardly a poem writer, just a frivolous lurker :)
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beautifulwind
I guessed right!Maybe 马后炮,Icouldn't figure it out:)
移花接木
你是hyper,我是hypo, 一人代表双子的其中一面
忒忒绿
The first poem and the first painting, both are impressive. Cong
忒忒绿
congratulations to Feng Er!
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beautifulwind
问问花董,Is this my first painting?:)
忒忒绿
这个小鹿的萌态表现的非常棒!
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beautifulwind
你从什么时候开始hypo的?:)
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beautifulwind
心中有萌,就会看到萌:)
天玉之
哈哈哈。。。惹祸了吧

 

哥们在笑坛hyper, 在梅雨潭hypo, 为啥呀?

 

天山晨
哈哈,你家小双子肯定是个姑娘,五月的花最美!
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Marauders
Wow, talented!
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beautifulwind
Wow,真的吗?太高兴得到你的表扬啦:)
天玉之
一并谢过楼上朋友们的生日祝福,美风版主的一片诗情画意!好感动,很温馨!么么哒 ~~~此贴收藏并转发了
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beautifulwind
恭喜风儿。首页进来,谢谢网管,梅雨潭的爱A Baby Fawn 祝花董,玉教,所有双子生快 推荐成功
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beautifulwind
玉教总是这么热情,感恩节颁奖典礼就是你第一个转发的:)
天玉之
谢谢网管和美风版主!新周愉快!~~
天玉之
举手之劳的事 :)