A Morning in May
By Tian Yu Zhi
From the kichen window
I see my birth month of May
green, fresh, a little wet with misty rain
The raspberries in the cereal bowl
carry the Sun’s promises, to make me
a little more tender and beautiful
Music slips down from the ceiling
surrounds me like moving clouds
flows away worries in a summer stream
Flowers on the patio
grow a new layer of petals overnight，
nature’s gratitude towards a gardener’s care
A stack of work in my office awaits for me to do
the thought of finishing them
makes me want to sing and swirl
I sip the coffee of life, delicious and strong
what needs to say, has been said
what’s in the past, engraved in memory
What lies ahead in the future
still unravel, with hope ——
a good day has just begun
2021.5.16 morning
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--- if "flow" is correct in this context. Maybe "melt"?
---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?
This is a wonderful poem. Sorry for the nitpicking.
好啊，我凑空来 ～～
那个melt 的建议也很好，我把flow 用在前面了，music flows down...
好，两个建议都采用了，再谢啊！
看来我还真得多来这里，藏龙卧虎的地方啊。。。
：）
A Morning in May
By Tian Yu Zhi
From the kichen window
I see my birth month of May
green, fresh, a little wet with misty rain
The raspberries in the cereal bowl
carry the Sun’s promises, to make me
a little more tender and beautiful
Music slips down from the ceiling
surrounds me like moving clouds
flows away worries in a summer stream
Flowers on the patio
grow a new layer of petals overnight，
nature’s gratitude towards a gardener’s care
A stack of work in my office awaits for me to do
the thought of finishing them
makes me want to sing and swirl
I sip the coffee of life, delicious and strong
what needs to say, has been said
what’s in the past, engraved in memory
What lies ahead in the future
still unravel, with hope ——
a good day has just begun
2021.5.16 morning
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英文诗 A Morning in May ［花承歌扇风分韵之歌］【七绝】 婆娑 （五歌） ［花承歌扇风分韵之歌］【七绝】 情渡 （五歌） ［花承歌扇风分韵之歌］【七绝】 嵩山仙境 （五歌） ［花承歌扇风分韵之歌］【七绝】 潇湘怨 （五歌）--- if "flow" is correct in this context. Maybe "melt"?
---if it would be better to replace "still unravel" with "yet to unravel"?
This is a wonderful poem. Sorry for the nitpicking.
好啊，我凑空来 ～～
那个melt 的建议也很好，我把flow 用在前面了，music flows down...
好，两个建议都采用了，再谢啊！
看来我还真得多来这里，藏龙卧虎的地方啊。。。
：）