【E诗E歌E决心】《Tenderness inside my palm》

移花接木
楼主 (文学城)

I am a passionated  刀郎 fan, not only listen to his songs but also sing. He is a genuine musician who put his heart and soul into his musical creations, my opinion. 

The song ‘手心里的温柔’ if not the top one, is one of my 刀郎 favorites.   I sang  and post it a while ago hoping someday to sing it again after improving my singing.  Last night BeautifulWind ‘s Vincent reminded me this song again, due to the coincidence in the  prelude of the two songs, the first few seconds are of identical tones. 

For the first time in a long time, I listened to it again, a strong will lightened me up pushing me to singing it in English.   What an inspiration! Thanks a lot.   

Coz the song is unforgettable to me, the translation process was swift,   basically, much like literal translation , word by word, followed by a little tweaking for rhym and smooth singing.

I sang  this morning in a rush,

刚早晨早起现K的就一遍没时间了,有地方犹豫了,自己写的歌词没背过,看着手机屏幕的中文歌词发懵,嗓子是哑的也请见谅。

《Tenderness inside my palm》

 

 

Music: 刀郎,手心里的温柔

English Lyrics by me

Chinese Lyrics by 刀郎 for your reference

你在我身边相对无言, You by my side, without a word
默默的许愿对爱的依恋 silent promise attaching to love 
牧场的炊烟装点着草原 Cookin’smoke on pasture decorate grassland
爱相拥着牧归的少年  Love, hugs young herder off grazing .   
你在我身边把我的手牵  You by my side, holding my hand
牵着我手心不变的誓言  holding my palm unchangeable promise.
高高的雪山祝福我们 High snow mountain blessing us.
爱在这一刻永恒永远 Love, this moment, forever, ever.  
爱到什么时候要爱到天长地久 Loving for a whole life, till, till the end of time
两个相爱的人 一直到迟暮时候 the two of true love, into twilight.     
我牵着你的手 我牵着你到白头 I am holding your hand, till, silver hair covering   
牵到地老天荒 看手心里的温柔 until forever ever, tenderness inside my palm.   

你在我身边把我的手牵  You by my side, holding my hand
牵着我手心不变的誓言  holding my palm unchangeable promise.
高高的雪山祝福我们    High snow mountain blessing us.
爱在这一刻永恒永远    Love, this moment, forever ever.  
爱到什么时候要爱到天长地久 Loving for a whole life, till, till the end of time
两个相爱的人 一直到迟暮时候the two of true love, into twilight.     
我牵着你的手 我牵着你到白头I am holding your hand, till, silver hair covering   
牵到地老天荒 看手心里的温柔until forever ever, tenderness inside my palm.  
爱到什么时候要爱到天长地久Loving for a whole life, till, till the end of time
两个相爱的人 一直到迟暮时候the two of true love, into twilight.     
我牵着你的手 我牵着你到白头I am holding your hand, till, silver hair covering   
牵到地老天荒 看手心里的温柔until forever ever, tenderness inside my palm.  

 

 

 

忒忒绿
花帅就是快手,这是第一个英文版本吧,唱译都是真哇噻,赞!
忒忒绿
Bro Flower’s voice sounds like

Bro Flower’s voice tastes like the Sauvignon (骚味浓)wines from California Napa valley ;)

回头笑笑
才男
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beautifulwind
早晨三个才子的连着三个重磅炸弹,让我的脖子仰望得打上了石膏:)不是一般的牛!

才思太敏捷了!吓人!

声音也刀郎!热烈鼓掌!

 

甜虫虫
这个也忒厉害了!翻译演唱都棒!我也喜欢刀郎的歌:)
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beautifulwind
我现在有一种不来美语世界,不知道童鞋们的英文水平有多高的感觉:)
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beautifulwind
恭喜花董。首页进来,谢谢网管,E活动英文翻译加演唱《Tenderness inside my palm》挂首成功:)
树的花花世界
花兄才思喷涌呀!
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xiaosai
哇塞!咋都这么有才涅?! I'm speechless!!!
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Ha65494
歌词中译英厉害啊!
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Marauders
+1
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beautifulwind
哈哈,我现在由衷地感谢让我回到美语世界的唱坛的版主们:)塞翁失马焉知非福呀!:)
山丘-
Niubility! This is not easy. Very impressive!~~~
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beautifulwind
就喜欢看你的点评!中英文都棒!赶紧参加活动!这次是全新主持人组合,会有不同的惊喜!猜猜是谁和谁?:)
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beautifulwind
下班路上听你的歌,边听边忍不住地笑:)
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beautifulwind
第一句是不是You‘re by my side 更好?
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beautifulwind
我是无知者无畏,居然敢当美坛版主。也是被blessed,在美坛遇见这么多又有趣英语又棒的牛人。。
移花接木
Im so useful!! Make u laugh
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beautifulwind
UR VIP!!