【一起民谣滚】【民谣】写一首英文歌 “ Are You Ready"

欲借嵯峨
楼主 (文学城)

 

Baby, are you ready
Let's climb the mountains,
 While you stand by me.
Baby, are you ready
Let's touch the waves 
Let's go to see the sea
Baby, I miss your smile
Like whispering wind, you sent to me.


Baby, as we promised
Don't be sad, don't hold your tears
I know I am a fool
But I know you are my world
If you bled
I bleed the same
If you're scared
I am on my way.


Baby, are you ready
Let's walk in the clouds,
 Touching the dream
Baby, are you ready
Let me hold your hands
Say I love you

 

天山晨
沙发赞!
琥珀之泪
支持原创,赞弹唱,花∠※花∠※花
无问东西
挖了个赛,上山,下海,入云端,浪漫柔情的护花使者!欲哥好棒的原创!
高尔吉
好听!
睫毛弯弯2021
自己写的?very能干!唱得也好,支持!
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zqy68
厉害了欲哥!
老地雷
占位

水平高了,搞英文原创了,晚点来听歌。

为谣队添洋子弹,好样的大卫

才歌
哇,多情的欲哥,,,这个作品真棒!好听极了!
玩票
唱给谁的啊。
老地雷
哎哟,这首真得感觉很成熟,再让老美critique一下有几处的发音真是一首非常棒的歌

也特有意境,弹唱超级棒!大赞!

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Ha65494
感动!真挚细腻,大赞精品原创!
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FuRongLi
大卫开始创作E歌了,词曲唱俱佳!
碧蓝天
哇!太牛了!为原创喝彩! 真好听呀!