With rhyme and reason, music and poetry are two sides of the same coin. They complement each other.
You've just made my day by mentioning a traditional Chinese poem of mine. For this, I can't thank you enough.
I recall the day and time when I got your comments on my poem that you quoted above. To say I was a bit shocked is an understatement. But then the poetry forum is open to everyone. As a contributor, I, therefore, should also be open to feedback as colorful as yours. I think I did fine.
Thankfully, Evergreen Pine has kindly given me a heads-up about this piece of creative music of yours. You have a style, which means quite a lot to your audience.
ROCK WINTER MAN
曲编：余青越
七绝：无题
来源：余青越
读文魂影意渐沉
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4.12.2021
原玉：
七絕：樱花緣
来源: LYJiang
飄來素屑拾來妍
灑在空空一薄箋
忘墨有香春可寄
朔方誰待雪軒前
—— 颺
4.9.2021
美语坛诗坛见过诗人们……
第一首“七绝”多处出律，抱歉，直言了
With rhyme and reason, music and poetry are two sides of the same coin. They complement each other.
You've just made my day by mentioning a traditional Chinese poem of mine. For this, I can't thank you enough.
I recall the day and time when I got your comments on my poem that you quoted above. To say I was a bit shocked is an understatement. But then the poetry forum is open to everyone. As a contributor, I, therefore, should also be open to feedback as colorful as yours. I think I did fine.
Thankfully, Evergreen Pine has kindly given me a heads-up about this piece of creative music of yours. You have a style, which means quite a lot to your audience.
Wishing you every success!