七绝《忘机》

平水韵上平五微

喜得秋兰的宝贵意见。


世味终如啖野薇，平安岁月苦中祈。
无端云影窗前过，再看原来白鹤飞。


--- 苇苇

 

 

苇苇应该很年轻啊，这诗写得历经沧桑的感觉。。。。

谢谢葱姐！人在天涯，多少有点感触的吧。

苇苇，一切随缘。只能这样说。万千祝福！

It's hard to shake it off. I'm feeling so blue.

May I crack you up?

It isn't easy to laugh it off, mind you.

It isn't easy, but it isn't impossible, either.

You won't give up on me. Go ahead and give it a try.

A starving squirrel happened to speak English...

What's stopping you? Go on!

It ran into me. Breathlessly it asked me...

Don't hold up your punchline.

Breathlessly,the starving squirrel asked me, "Are you nuts?"

Hahahahahahaha......!

Wei Wei is cracking up, big time.

The nutty squirrel asked you, "Are you nuts?" Are you?

No way. And you?

NO WAY!

I hate to interrupt you guys. Qiulan, you're so funny!

I take it as a compliment.

You earned it. OK, I'll let you go.

挺好的一首平水韵七绝。不怕用窄韵，点题而不留痕，末句馀味无穷。古典诗歌后继有人。将来阅历更深，诗必更耐品。

太感谢江先生了！

没太看懂：）