【岁末文艺赛】《Ideal Friend》《理想的朋友》

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CBA7
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《Ideal Friend》
by CBA7

he/she is in a corner of this world
near or far
not in an ideal world
but he/she is an ideal friend
brings rainbows in rainy days
silent in sunny days

《理想的朋友》
by CBA7

他/她在这个世界的一个角落里
或近或远
不在理想的世界里
但他/她是一个理想的朋友
雨天带来彩虹
晴天沉默

P.S. This poem was inspired by Ray Cope, a British poet, and his poem Ideal World below. 

Ideal World.
by Ray cope

In an ideal world-------
I'm in a cottage by a lake.
A cottage,nestling against woodland.
I'm clad in denim.
I'm shod in wellington boots.
I'm tending a garden:
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] by my side.
And a wise old cat who lurks in the hedgerow.
I'm stooping amidst flowers.
Grubbing happily in the loam.
Contented:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a canoe, gaily painted.
Out in the water.
A sharp - edged craft of native American ilk.
I'm watching fish rise.
I watch the wild duck bobbing.
I catch the sun on my paddle,
as i glide silently by.
Through water-lilies,through rushes.
Sometimes drifting with the breeze.
Unconcerned:

In an ideal world ----
I'm in a forest,bathed in dappled shadows.
I'm rustling through leaf litter.
I'm snapping twigs underfoot.
I'm listening to birdsong.
And the scamperings of small things.
There's a dog [ perhaps two ] roving ahead of me.
I am in awe of the greenness.
I am the watcher of bees.
I am brother to The Green Man.
Fortunate am i:
【Ray's poem was published on Allpoetry, the largest and best poetry site in the world】


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lovecat08
才女!
梧桐之丘
美的遐想。。。
C
CBA7
过奖了,谢谢爱猫的鼓励!
C
CBA7
理想的朋友会带给我们美的遐想 :) 谢谢梧桐版主的点评。
n
nearby
采菊东篱下,把酒话桑麻。好久不见7妹
C
CBA7
哈哈哈,7妹忙着看世界杯呢 :)
n
nearby
想不到哈。赞一个。另外请7妹多参加活动,为邻兄捧场
C
CBA7
哈哈哈,7妹是假球迷,每4年才看一次球 :) 为邻兄捧场,没问题,这不是赶在摩法大战之前来参加活动了吗 :)
望沙
角落很流行文题
C
CBA7
谢谢沙沙的点评
烟酒嗓
好诗!我想打着雨伞追着她一起看雨霁彩虹~~
浮云驰
理想的世界只存在于理想中,理想的他和她更加美好
紫若蓝
在理想的世界、遇到理想的朋友。。。
n
nearby
邻兄安排任务:7妹再参加活动>=3次 :-)

C
CBA7
好浪漫!谢谢诗人歌星的光临和鼓励。
C
CBA7
浮云的解读很到位啊,谢谢浮云版主!理想的世界在现实中是不存在的,但是现实中会有理想的朋友 :)
C
CBA7
那就最理想了 :) 谢谢若蓝的点评。
r
renqiulan
在友谊中寻得理想,在理想中寻得友谊。
C
CBA7
很美好的感悟,谢谢秋兰分享。