Frozen ashes from whose bones left alone for ages in the ark in the dark But the ashes glow as white as snow
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Amlu - Powerful brevity with strong imagery. well penned
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Bones anchored to tendons Tendons anchored to muscles Where is bones' freedom
Ask wind in which freedom flows Ask fire in which freedom burns
Hugs between tendons and muscles Dances between wind and fire Bones into ashes fly and paint the sky gray
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Amlu - A powerful ink on freedom..so creative with strong imagery. How true! bones are not feer at all..Great write making the readers ponder on it.
Paidge Searchwell - A deep poem bringing on analytical questions. Great work!
冷冻骨灰 从谁的骨头 独自一人 适合年龄 在方舟里 不知情 但灰烬会发光 像雪一样白
固定在肌腱上的骨头 肌腱固定在肌肉上 骨头的自由在哪里
问风 自由流动 问火 在其中燃烧自由
肌腱和肌肉之间的拥抱 风与火的舞蹈 骨头化为灰烬 飞翔，把天空涂成灰色