这两天大家聊relationship正好看到我们三儿的作业写的是相关题目。大家有兴趣可以看看一个12岁的孩子怎么看这些

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donau
楼主 (文学峸)

她英文当然不是母语但是这篇受到老师力赞,说fabulous一个字我都没的改。

F
FEVRE
thoughtful and well organized article
F
FEVRE
帮你转成文字

Is it better to have one true friend than all the acquaintances in the world?
Or is it not?


A very difficult question. But is it truly that difficult? We know that there are many nice
people in the world. Only having one of them as a friend... can be difficult. You would have
to sacrifice all the others for just one person. But we also know that there aren't only nice
people in the world. In fact, there are many greedy ones, who are willing to do everything to
gain more power and wealth.


Better or not?
Having only one friend but a true friend is for many reasons a good decision. You can get rid
of many bad people in your personal life. You can be sure to have at least one trustworthy
person around you. A person with whom you can share all your secrets and a person who
will share all their secret with you. But it can become lonely. Very lonely. Once your friend
moved to another aren, it will become more diflicult to see each other. But in exchange, you
will receive a true friend.
On the other hand, having all acquaintances in the world can be very exciting. You would
know all the famous personalities what would be nice - for sure. But will it stay nice?
You already know that there are not only good people in the world. Maybe are you the fan of
a person, who isn't as nice as you thought, and you will be disappointed. But you will meet
lots of nice people who are going to make your life better. You will be willing to sacrifice
everything for a few of there people. But not everyone of them will think like you, There are
going to be people, who are greedy enough to betray you and you will be abandoned. Maybe
are you going to fall in depressions because there are too many bad people in the world.
Maybe have you already felt the pain of being abandoned. Maybe are you traumatized. But
you are also going to receive lots of new people - good people.

The Decision
Is yours to make. But choose wisely. Now you know the advantages and disadvantages of
your decision. Now take a deep breath and think about everything. Think about what you
just experienced and think about what you are going to experience with your decision.
Think about all the adventures you're going to master. But always remember the bad things
about life. Never forget, that you must be wary; no matter what decision you make. Think
about it all by yourself and never forget, that you are living your life, and only yours. And
this decision is yours to make, no matter what you are going to choose in the end.

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donau
多谢。你这样容易看多了
糯米粥
比我在这个年龄要甩几条街!

才12岁的小姑娘,就懂得看硬币的两面,何况还是用非母语的外语写的!

也赞你们k-12教育。老师可以出这样thought provoking的作文题,真好!

想到我家男孩在二年级做的一些题目:一些话让孩子们分辨是fact, 还是opinion. 我从未有这个意识,直到20几岁来美,才意识到二者区别。孩子们二年级就知道了这个区别...

d
donau
我也是吃惊啊。这些年带孩子最大的收获就是跟着孩子们又从头活了一遍就是跟着一起长一起经历。在另外一个完全不同的环境里

所以我一直说怎么都值了

核桃小丸子
条例清晰分明,还写的不急不缓的,有乃母的风范:)
d
donau
比我强比我强我12的时候应该写不出来
糯米粥
完全同感。太有收获了,而且每天都过得有希望和有意思
土豆-禾苗
是不是三儿最像多瑙小时啊?
F
FEVRE
乃母那个文风促急啊
J
JSL2023
赞!现在教育要全面得多,我们是学好数理化…:)
d
donau
应该我们老二最像我。这个小的还真不敢说
d
donau
我也觉得能被给机会想然后表达是很幸运的事
d
donau
我又没看懂你想说什么
F
FEVRE
我说你的文风与不急不缓相反
山中百合
多瑙,透过文字,我看到的是一位自信少女的独立思考。她对朋友的理解愿意和妈妈分享,说明成长环境宽松自然氛围好,幸运的孩儿

少女对朋友的理解率真炫目,让人渴望。

这世界有那么多人,只有一个能成为你真正的朋友,这个朋友可以信赖,可以分享所有的秘密,天大的秘密。朋友搬家会感到孤独,少女的孤独需要深呼吸。王维的孤独需要酒,劝君更尽一杯酒。不同的年龄,不同的场景,相同的是对朋友的真诚和不舍。

 

小少女也体会到,朋友没有你想象的那么好,她会让你失望,让你痛苦受煎熬,也会让你的生活变得更好。所以要保持警惕,做明智的选择,生活是自己的,无论怎样的选择,都是自己负责。

 

一想到小少女为了写作文,坐在电脑前绞尽脑汁,一脸稚气却是认真思索严肃的样子,就忍俊不住。用文字传递声音的少女真可爱,她的世界充满幻想,充满美好。

 

这让我想起埃莱娜·费兰特迷人的那不勒斯四部曲。书中讲述了两个好朋友从少女时代起,持续了超过半个世纪的友谊。正如多瑙家小少女感觉到的那样,朋友不是想象中的那么好。《我的天才女友》相处过程中,有欢笑、有竞争,也有嫉妒和辛酸。她们之间既互相帮助,也互相洗劫,她们流泪、付出、收获,总能不断地汲取对方的能量和聪明。

木有文化
多瑙这就太露怯了吧

你家小孩写文章写的比你好很多啊

看客2010
青出于蓝而胜于蓝的节奏啊:)
d
donau
百合阿姨真是这些小家伙的好知己。可能她们自己看自己都没这么明白。你提到的这套书应该有拍成剧

我大概只看了一点就被公司BLOCK了。正想着是不是去买个笔记本接着补呢。

你看我们成年人多么无趣,只会斤斤计较看得见茶米油盐。

d
donau
比我好不重要重要的是要比她们家uncle没文化好那我就要从心里笑出来了
d
donau
看姐见笑了。我是挺感慨的看到孩子们这样一天一天长大用自己的眼看世界用自己的心体会世界
p
polebear
太赞了,颇有乃母的风范,擅长思辨,前途无量
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donau
我只是感慨这真的是自由地思考。肯定不是我教的