《The Shadow of Speeding》《超速的影子》

The Shadow of Speeding

a police car runs after his
like a shadow of speeding

in the shadow, a ticket speaking
fines help prevent dangers

the shadow of speeding becomes sunlights
in the distance

超速的影子

一辆警车追赶他的车
像个超速的影子

在影子里，一张罚单在说话
罚款有助于预防危险

超速的影子变成了阳光
在远处

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警察超速不算超速吗?

哈哈哈，好问题! To catch up a speedy car, police must be speedy :)

hhh, who writes them a speeding ticket?

fun

Haha, me! I'm speeding, following the police car :) 开个玩笑而已！

Thank you, 颤音！Your Light and Shadow series inspired me :)

It's about the rules in our society, they're not that bad :)

Just like shadow, they can become sunlights.

fines help prevent dangers. Stay positive! :))

the shadow of speeding becomes sunlights in the distance

喜欢小西这种充满阳光的心态

随时随处用诗记录身边的事情，很棒！

Yes, always stay positive, especially from the long run!

谢谢盈盈的鼓励。生活就是诗，无处不在 ：）

I got a few speeding tickets; my car demands it.

Hahaha, you spoiled your car!

我的车觉得没被开超速罚单太丢脸。 哈哈

哈哈哈，你的车很为你争光啊。You have such a sense of humor, love it!

Shadow of speeding, still imagining what it is.

feels like the ticket is quite shady.

赞寓意简洁的好诗！

The policeman may waive your ticket if he read the poem:))

Playful!

Or show some cleavage/ legs...hahaha

flattered and humbled

Good idea. But police needs to understand the poem first

The police car is the shadow of speeding.

警车追赶超速的车，警车就像是那个超速的车的影子一样，二者形影不离。

Yes, at that moment you may feel it shady,

but from the long run you would feel it sunny. 罚单有点忠言逆耳的味道。

Thank you!

终于懂得了，有点深奥。哈哈哈，惭愧，惭愧！

I will print it and keep it in my car and give it a try :)

Thank you for your feedback.

Bad idea :(

In case police doesn't get it, you can help now :)

No problem, you are good!

对于超速司机来说，罚单在当时是阴影（shadow），从长远看，罚单是阳光（sunlight），可以起到防患于未然的作用。

唉，吃罚单还那么欢欣鼓舞，真行。

Haha, I’m afraid police may give me a ticket.

Haha, it must be a good story, please update! :))

My poem is about the rules in our society,

not just about a speeding ticket :)

不是欢欣鼓舞，而是要用辩证和长远的眼光去看待事情。

My poem is inspired by my observation

and written by my imagination.

The speeding driver in the poem 是泛指，he could be anyone :)

诗歌是艺术，高于生活，不宜用太实用的眼光去评判 ：）

Hahaha, just a joke. Don't take it seriously.

哈哈哈，I’m joking too!

Hahaha, I was just kidding!