I loved the picture you posted. You know that I was a professional photographer for many years. I used to enter print competition, so I learned many things about composition. Your daughter is the subject, and you have several interesting leading lines—the trees, the path. All of those things are in the bottom of your image, so you don't need all that sky diluting the effect. I've included my idea for cropping. This is a suggestion and if it is unwelcome, or if you disagree, you don't hurt my feelings if you don't like it. But just know that I rarely take the time to make such a suggestion—only when i see such a lovely image that can be improved by something as simple as cropping. It's nice to compose in camera (or phone) but I like the ability to be able to take my time and analyze the image afterwards, so this is not a criticism!
晚上准备睡觉了，突然收到一个message，是以前一起骑车的一个大叔发来的消息。
他很少发消息给我，但是我知道他以前是职业摄影师，每次我们出去骑车，他都会给我们拍非常棒的照片，就是用普通的iphone拍照。但是我自己就拍不出那种感觉。我觉得和构图非常有关。
他是看到了前几天我和爱美丽晨跑时候我随手给爱美丽拍的一张照片，突然来了兴趣点评了几句，顿时有种蓬荜生辉的感觉，这还是我一边跑一边拍的，拍一下自己的肩膀，哈哈。
第一张是我拍的，第二张是大叔重新crop一下。大家看看有啥区别吗？嘻嘻
I loved the picture you posted. You know that I was a professional photographer for many years. I used to enter print competition, so I learned many things about composition. Your daughter is the subject, and you have several interesting leading lines—the trees, the path. All of those things are in the bottom of your image, so you don't need all that sky diluting the effect. I've included my idea for cropping. This is a suggestion and if it is unwelcome, or if you disagree, you don't hurt my feelings if you don't like it. But just know that I rarely take the time to make such a suggestion—only when i see such a lovely image that can be improved by something as simple as cropping. It's nice to compose in camera (or phone) but I like the ability to be able to take my time and analyze the image afterwards, so this is not a criticism!
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第二张的缺点是，少了蓝天显得空气不够清爽，人物太近减弱了动感
人物缩小以后。“留白“更多些。意境显得更深远些，整体更隽永。
我没有经过艺术训练，所以，听听大家分析都觉得有道理。
记得以前爱自由mm说过，照片最要紧的是真情实感，其他都是技术层面的东西。这句话我印象很深，也深以为然，我觉得那个大叔也是因为被这张照片里小小的爱美丽跑步的身影感动，才会自告奋勇来做裁剪。所以归根结底还是因为照片的主题打动了他。