《The Color Black 颜色黑色》赠无忧

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CBA7
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今闻《书香之家》论坛版主尘凡无忧女士荣退,特赠小诗一首。忧忧一直为书香无私奉献,劳苦功高,请多保重,书香还需要忧忧的继续关爱和支持。

《The Color Black》
by CBA7

I saw 
the color black 
When we lost parents
When friends were no longer available

I saw 
the color black 
When children didn't come home from school
When soldiers were killed by war

I see 
the color black 
When we dig the earth just for our own benefit
When we don't have love even if we have all the other colors

I hope 
I only see 
the pure color black 
When I wish to be a blackbird

A comment from Allpoetry:
Papa Terminus - Black being the color of death is a very prominent image for me, the themes from school-shooting, war, and environment, really is quite striking...this really captures the attention in simplistic way, but to me the premise speaks with such volume.

《颜色黑色》
by CBA7

我看见了
黑色
当我们失去父母的时候
当朋友不再可得的时候

我看见了
黑色
当孩子没有从学校回家的时候
当士兵死于战争的时候

我看见了
黑色
当我们只是为了自己的利益而挖掘地球的时候
当我们即使拥有所有其他颜色但是没有爱的时候

我希望
我只看见
纯的颜色黑色
当我想成为一只黑鸟的时候


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梧桐之丘
深沉,富有情感!
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CBA7
谢谢梧桐兄的点评。赞梧桐兄勇挑重担,荣任书坛版主!
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lovecat08
好诗啊!
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lovecat08
乌克兰就有那黑色!
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lovecat08
校园枪杀案,就有那黑色。
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lovecat08
无忧说她这次真隐了,谢谢你。
浮云驰
最好是只看到纯的黑色,否则后面的附加意义太沉重了
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lovecat08
+100
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nearby
7妹有心
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CBA7
谢谢爱猫的点评和鼓励。
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CBA7
忧忧辛苦了,好好休息,多多保重。
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CBA7
同感,这正是这首诗的最后一段里所表达的期望 :)
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CBA7
7妹有心,邻兄有悟,谢谢邻兄的点评。
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CBA7
这首诗的主题包括:死亡,友谊,校园枪击案,战争,环境保护,爱,自由。(英文见里面)

The themes in this poem include: death, friendship, school-shooting, war, environmental-protection, love, and freedom.

A comment from Allpoetry:

Papa Terminus - Black being the color of death is a very prominent image for me, the themes from school-shooting, war, and environment, really is quite striking...this really captures the attention in simplistic way, but to me the premise speaks with such volume.

 

 

梧桐之丘
谢谢,共同努力。
冯墟
像您这样几句话就把重要的问题都写到了,那我们还写什么?好霸道 :-)
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ling_yin_shi
最爱blackbird,有首歌来着:bye, bye, blackbird。约翰尼德普演过公众之敌,最后也是:

bye, my black bird.

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CBA7
哈哈哈,冯兄好幽默,过奖了,7妹只不过是点到为止,深度探讨还得靠大家啊,谢谢。
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CBA7
谢谢灵隐士的点评和分享。