工地大爷街头挑战写的《我的母亲》,大家觉得咋样?(图)

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lisifessvg
楼主 (北美华人网)


还有网友把这篇作文翻译成了英文: 我: My Mother They handed me a card with a topic on it. Said it was for some online video. I was the only one in our crew who'd finished high school, so they figured l'd know how to talk. The card said: "My Mother." Damn. I didn't expect that. Been more than thirty years since she passed. Buried up by the village edge under a hump of earth no one notices anymore. I see her as clear as day. Worn hands, steady eyes, back always bent, but never bowed. She was a small woman with the strength of an ox and the heart of ten. Woke before the sun, worked past dark. No rest. Not once.The clothes she wore were thin, washed to rags, patched for a thousand times. I never heard her complain. She had a lot of work to do and no time for words. She didn't fight, didn't fuss. If there was something good in the house, a fresh egg or a bit of meat, she gave it away before she took a bite, and rarely saying things like,"They need it more." What stuck with me the most? Mealtimes.Whole family sat down to eat. She no C dir U Stayed at the stove, ladling bowls, checking the fire. When we finished, she'd look in the pot. If there was food left, she ate a little. If not, she said she wasn't hungry.She was always "not hungry." We weren't rich. No one in the village was. But we had each other, and that meant something back then. Still does, if you ask me. My mother, I think she was richer than many in what mattered. She made dumplings once a year for the New Year. Man, those dumplings.Thin dough, barely enough filling, but you'd think it was gold the way we waited for them. New Year nearly broke her. Scrubbing the house, hauling water, chopping, kneading, washing. Her back was shot by the end of it.But she'd still be smiling, watching us kids set off fireworks. That smile, that was something real. Not the kind you paste on. Come autumn, we'd harvest grain. Took all day.Then at night we'd stand around while they handed out the year's rations. Took hours. Cold as fuck. She didn't have much to wear, just thin cloth, threadbare. She'd shake from the cold, teeth chattering, but she didn't go inside until it was done. Then she'd wrap herself in a thin quilt and wait for dawn. And when the sun came, she was back up, stoking the fire, fixing breakfast for a dozen mouths, lifting that giant iron pot like it was made of paper. I still don't know how she did it. She wasn't a big woman. But she carried more than most men ever could. She did that, yes, quietly, without help. She died young. Just past fifty. Worked herself into the ground. Her grave is small, unmarked, grass grows over it every year, green, then yellow, then green again. I visit. I always do Stand there. Say a few words. I've spent my life in the city. Worked hard jobs.Cement, rebar, scaffolding, jobs that kill you slow. Hands like leather, shoulders full of knots . But when I'm close to quitting, I remember her. I remember how she lifted that pot. I remember how she kept going when she could barely stand. That's where I get my strength. From her. She didn't leave me money. Didn't leave me property. She left me something better. That's worth more than gold. Now I'm a father. A grandfather, even. But I haven't said "Mom" in over three decades. Feels strange to think about it. One day, when I've got nothing left in me, when the rebar is too heavy and the stairs are too steep, I'll head back to that village, lie down next to her. Maybe then, if I call her name, she'll hear me.
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Happypig
感动 看哭了😭
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shaohuacrystal
真情实感的好文章
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Alkichae
没有技巧全是感情,太感动了
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maaagiaaa2004
又读了一遍,写的真好
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zhangxx818
虽然感人,但是希望全天下的女子都不要象他妈一样委曲求全,连吃饭都不敢吃,最后自己累死了。 这种“善良贤淑”,对个人不是啥好东西。
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NewBeing
最后一段看哭了,对母亲浓浓的思念之情毫无掺假。 前面写母亲怎么劳苦,吃饭不上桌,总是忙忙碌碌,我就在想:这家其他人是个什么生活状态?都这么劳累,还是只有他妈妈这么劳累?我知道中国有些省份的传统习俗就是媳妇累死男人也绝不伸手的。
布丁lin
果然还是真诚最能打动人
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shubashuba
写得真好真感人!希望以后没有过得这么苦的妈妈
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pistachio717
我一边很倾佩他的妈妈,这么无私奉献还心态极好,一边庆幸自己没有过这种生活😅
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add
写得真好,感动了
风起洛阳
非常真诚非常质朴。 没有华丽的辞藻,没有埋冤抱怨。 真实的底层人民的生活和无奈。
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Shirleybul
虽然不知道这篇文章是不是炒作,但很久没见到这么真情实意的的文章了
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ronyning
那一句:等老了,抗不了水泥了,就去母亲的坟旁边躺下,在叫声妈妈,没准她就能听见了。这句话,直接哭了。
一尼逆
周围有个移民老人70多岁吧,20岁不到出来的,和妻子回母国度假,父母早已过世,说他今后要回到父母身边,假期还未结束就在母国突然走了
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aegeanboat
写的不错。就是有点假。 现在都当爷爷了的,起码是70后吧。那时候出生的能高中毕业的,和现在高中毕业的完全不是一个层次,怎么会工地还扛水泥?
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huaren015
NewBeing 发表于 2025-07-11 12:38
最后一段看哭了,对母亲浓浓的思念之情毫无掺假。 前面写母亲怎么劳苦,吃饭不上桌,总是忙忙碌碌,我就在想:这家其他人是个什么生活状态?都这么劳累,还是只有他妈妈这么劳累?我知道中国有些省份的传统习俗就是媳妇累死男人也绝不伸手的。

所以很多华男希望有个新“娘”。
因为没有新老娘们不求回报贯穿他们一生的付出,他们真活不了啊。
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deapwy
写的真好,光是看文字就潸然泪下