让chatgpt给写了一篇，可惜太长了。 In the tranquil embrace of the starlit night, an age-old connection between humanity and nature comes to life. The vast expanse of the celestial canvas above us has always inspired wonder, introspection, and a sense of our place within the universe. This profound connection is not only a source of inspiration but also a reminder of our inherent bond with the natural world. As I gaze into the starry heavens, I am reminded of how our shared destiny is woven into the fabric of the cosmos, igniting a desire to explore and preserve the delicate interplay between humankind and nature. The starlit night, with its shimmering constellations and distant galaxies, has long captured the human imagination. It serves as a reminder of our intrinsic curiosity and quest for understanding. Just as ancient civilizations relied on the stars for navigation and storytelling, we too find ourselves drawn to the mysteries they hold. As I look up into the night sky, I am reminded of our ancestors who used the stars as guides, shaping their journeys and charting their futures. This connection echoes within me, propelling me to seek knowledge and embark on a journey of self-discovery. In the midst of our technologically-driven world, the starlit night offers a respite, allowing us to reconnect with nature on a profound level. The quietude of the night encourages introspection, inviting us to ponder our place in the cosmos. The contrast between the boundless heavens and the finite nature of our existence evokes humility and a sense of interconnectedness. This connection isn't limited to our species alone; it extends to the intricate ecosystems that flourish under the same celestial canopy. Just as stars are interconnected in constellations, so too are species interconnected within ecosystems. Observing the night sky fosters a deep appreciation for the delicate balance that sustains life on Earth. However, this connection is not just one of observation and reflection; it also carries a responsibility to preserve and protect the natural world. The starlit night serves as a poignant reminder of the fragility of our planet. Light pollution, environmental degradation, and climate change threaten to dim the brilliance of both our night sky and the ecosystems that sustain us. As I consider the imperiled beauty above and below, I am filled with a sense of urgency to advocate for sustainable practices and conservation efforts. Just as our ancestors relied on the stars, future generations deserve the opportunity to gaze upon the same awe-inspiring spectacle. The starlit night beckons us to explore the profound connection between humanity and nature. It ignites our curiosity, fosters introspection, and demands our responsibility. As I stand beneath the glittering tapestry of the universe, I am reminded that we are all interconnected—humankind, the natural world, and the cosmos. This connection shapes our journey, fuels our passions, and compels us to safeguard the delicate balance that sustains life. With each star that twinkles overhead, I am reminded that our actions on Earth resonate far beyond ourselves, echoing across the universe itself.
老新闻了，当年就看过，这妹子后来说过自己不去yale “In the end, she opted to go to Auburn University instead. One big reason, she shared, is that the Alabama school is much closer to home.” “I absolutely love Yale, but I felt so at home at Auburn,” she told HuffPost. “I love the South and the school spirit. I will be a part of the Honors College. I’m so honored to have been accepted by Yale, though!” At Auburn, she plans to pursue a business degree while minoring in economics, she told the Tennessean, which also reported that the school provided scholarship opportunities. 她后来选的学校有奖学金。所以人家本来就不是非要爬藤，才能这么轻松地写
2017年，在耶鲁的申请中，有一道短文写作的题目是这样的：请写一些她喜欢做的事情。而作为披萨重度爱好者，这位妹纸十分真诚的说：我最爱的是，从“Papa John’s”订比萨！
在这篇短短的200字的短文中，她这样描写到：
甚至还有一位招生官在看完这篇作文后直接点了个披萨吃
很快，Williams就拿到了耶鲁的Offer
MARK
没问题，前面有了to verb, 后面就可以直接用动词了。
比如my favorite thing is order pizza 就不对了。
这种文章得看是什么人写的，亚裔写未必有用
如果这个标准，所有的胖子都可以进yale了，晚上睡觉前打开冰箱，3餐中间去厨房拿零食。。。等等等。
哇，写的真好。
理解错了吧，my child at heart，我理解是指她心里的小孩，指她自己......谁心底还不是个宝宝呢🤣
Child in heart 是心里的那个小女孩的意思吧？
这文章有煽动性，可以做广告词了，大胆幽默别具一格
同感同感。。。
很多老美名校情结不是很强，选学校看奖学金、地理位置的的大有人在
不肯定她的家庭环境怎样，父母或者没干涉或着认可她的作文，其实也说明了很多，估计用顾问的或父母一起参与申请的，都不会认同孩子交这么一篇，即使成年人专业顾问作文水平高的，因为没有这孩子的心态，也写不出这样的文章。
硬实力是根本，这些东西实际上是小节。
第一代大学生，很可能账面低收入，Yale不给助学金？
这个孩子可能没有很多机会去接触其他的东西，如果是这样，需要理解和欣赏，而不是风凉话。也许她经历很多不同经历，就是喜欢点比萨，比如有的孩子爸爸妈妈带他们吃遍米其林但是还就是喜欢麦当劳，因为不健康，妈妈不给买，为了获得麦当劳的一份薯条超级努力守规矩两星期，不知道的人也可能会说，“这孩子的眼界就在麦当劳啊？这世界上还有更多好吃。”。 这种话不会体现这孩子，只会更多体现说话的人。
白马啸西风里面一句话我很喜欢，‘那都是很好很好的啊，可我偏偏不喜欢’。
她也才毕业没多久吧，怎么就断定发展很一般了呢？
😄 如果是自己家孩子，知道是这么写的，大概率是希望孩子改写别的。这种risk太大了。
这不错 还能收啪啪John的广告费
no grammar mistake here
至少比卖惨的好。
你根本就没有搞懂逻辑，在这个多数有点钱就找申请机构包装假大空，堆砌材料的背景下，这种贴近生活的文章偶尔突破拿个牛校很正常，你换个人写换个人审，这份申请就被毙了，任何事情都有其偶然性和必然性。
这招生官估计是个男的，看到这篇小文章满足了丫的所有想象。这要是落到白大妈手里没准直接毙了。
In the tranquil embrace of the starlit night, an age-old connection between humanity and nature comes to life. The vast expanse of the celestial canvas above us has always inspired wonder, introspection, and a sense of our place within the universe. This profound connection is not only a source of inspiration but also a reminder of our inherent bond with the natural world. As I gaze into the starry heavens, I am reminded of how our shared destiny is woven into the fabric of the cosmos, igniting a desire to explore and preserve the delicate interplay between humankind and nature.
The starlit night, with its shimmering constellations and distant galaxies, has long captured the human imagination. It serves as a reminder of our intrinsic curiosity and quest for understanding. Just as ancient civilizations relied on the stars for navigation and storytelling, we too find ourselves drawn to the mysteries they hold. As I look up into the night sky, I am reminded of our ancestors who used the stars as guides, shaping their journeys and charting their futures. This connection echoes within me, propelling me to seek knowledge and embark on a journey of self-discovery.
In the midst of our technologically-driven world, the starlit night offers a respite, allowing us to reconnect with nature on a profound level. The quietude of the night encourages introspection, inviting us to ponder our place in the cosmos. The contrast between the boundless heavens and the finite nature of our existence evokes humility and a sense of interconnectedness. This connection isn't limited to our species alone; it extends to the intricate ecosystems that flourish under the same celestial canopy. Just as stars are interconnected in constellations, so too are species interconnected within ecosystems. Observing the night sky fosters a deep appreciation for the delicate balance that sustains life on Earth.
However, this connection is not just one of observation and reflection; it also carries a responsibility to preserve and protect the natural world. The starlit night serves as a poignant reminder of the fragility of our planet. Light pollution, environmental degradation, and climate change threaten to dim the brilliance of both our night sky and the ecosystems that sustain us. As I consider the imperiled beauty above and below, I am filled with a sense of urgency to advocate for sustainable practices and conservation efforts. Just as our ancestors relied on the stars, future generations deserve the opportunity to gaze upon the same awe-inspiring spectacle.
The starlit night beckons us to explore the profound connection between humanity and nature. It ignites our curiosity, fosters introspection, and demands our responsibility. As I stand beneath the glittering tapestry of the universe, I am reminded that we are all interconnected—humankind, the natural world, and the cosmos. This connection shapes our journey, fuels our passions, and compels us to safeguard the delicate balance that sustains life. With each star that twinkles overhead, I am reminded that our actions on Earth resonate far beyond ourselves, echoing across the universe itself.
我娃真的很喜欢order奶茶和披萨，七八岁时候自己点就很有成人仪式感。高中生的independence我就不确定了。。。
她后来选的学校有奖学金。所以人家本来就不是非要爬藤，才能这么轻松地写
全名Carolina Williams是白女